Brief
Here’s the official brief set by my tutors for this project:
Project Proposal
Pitch
Pitch Feedback
Peer Feedback
Strengths
– Very confidently presented. You do it in a way where you add a bit of humour to what your saying, which you might think I might mean negatively. However, it makes what you saying feel way more natural and interesting.
– Your first idea is really interesting. Gives me man from U.N.C.L.E vibes. I would have loved to have seen it, but I can totally understand why you didn’t decide to go through with it.
– The second idea is also really interesting. Could have looked into the music video for Escapism by RAYE. However, I can once again see why you decided not to go through with it.
– The third idea is once again great. I do think you will do amazing job pulling it off as I know you are great with visual pieces. I recommend you look on Vimeo for inspiration as they have some great visual and experimental music videos, if you look in the right places.
– I love, love how you show off the different techniques with GIFs. It really helps you to picture how the final project is going to look and just makes me more excited to see it.
– Great detail on target audience also worth pointing out how great it is you only really include small paragraphs or small bullet points. This means I can easily read what’s on your pitch and still focus on what you’re saying.
– Good detail on festivals. I can definitely see you winning some of them.
– I like how you basically talk to the audience making us feel engaged
– I love how you have took into account the kind of things that went wrong last year and how you then are using this to improve this year, such as how you changed how your handling your production diary.
Improvements
– Just flex your kit why don’t you … No in all seriousness I think the only thing you need to watch is your scheduling. But I’m sure you’ll manage this.
Score
Presentation design: 10/10
Presenting skills: 10/10
First idea I quite like, the idea has a cool story that you don’t necessarily need tons of actors for. Just a single scene. You would probably need a decently large space though.
Don’t shoot it down though, you don’t necessarily need a large ballroom, the Harraby catholic club has a decently sized room that I think might work in that case.
For the second idea it could definitely work. If you were going to do it definitely look into the Fentanyl epidemic in America, heroin in Europe and cocaine in high society. If anything do it for research.
Idea three: If you were able to use the glass panes in the theater I get that it’s unlikely but maybe sweet talking one of the performing arts tutors might get you in there for abit
Look into Micheal Jackson’s choreography, his concerts are well known for the high energy and the meaning behind it.
Tutor Feedback
Strengths
– Good detail in initial ideas, ambitious.
– Well researched.
– Ideas are well justified based on what you have done before.
Areas for Improvement
– You will need to keep to planning
– Do not procrastinate with your blog
– Keep up to date with production diary
General Comments
– Very good pitch, high level.
Content: Very Good
Slide Quality: Very Good
Confidence: Very Good
Creativity: Very Good